This is very nice and honest. Your vision was lovely but a little overused. I liked the way you worded it (haven't seen that much) so I didn't take off very much and gave you 4 stars. Once again this is an interesting topic and you brought it out well but it is used often. Your technique for this was great but the rhyming at awkward points was strange. I think you do better when you don't rhyme. But this was VERY meaningful, so i gave it 4.5. The impact upon me was worth 5 stars. This is lovely put and just, out there. It stands out and I will hold these words forever in my heart for when I most need them. Great job and keep it up!
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Your vision was lovely but a little overused. I liked the way you worded it (haven't seen that much) so I didn't take off very much and gave you 4 stars.
Once again this is an interesting topic and you brought it out well but it is used often.
Your technique for this was great but the rhyming at awkward points was strange. I think you do better when you don't rhyme. But this was VERY meaningful, so i gave it 4.5.
The impact upon me was worth 5 stars. This is lovely put and just, out there. It stands out and I will hold these words forever in my heart for when I most need them.
Great job and keep it up!